Teukso fanfic chap. 12 “Burden” by jerqu


Chapter 12: A Burden

The twins drowsily snuggled with their Mom in the den watching the Disney movie “Brave” when her cell phone rang. It was Sungmin.

SM:”Anneong Sora , how are you and the kids?.”

Sora:”oh, hello Sungmin we’re good.heheh! how are you?”

SM: “Can I invite you tomorrow? I know you love watching musical plays, I got invited and have two tickets for “The Phantom of the Opera.” Please, I really need one beautiful lady to boast my ego.”

Sora has heard so much about this musical play. The Phantom of the Opera is a musical by Andrew Lloyd Webber, based on the French novel Le Fantôme de l’Opéra by Gaston Leroux. It is considered by many to be the most successful musical of all time and is also the longest running show in Broadway history. She was actually invited by the organiser but she declined due to her hectic schedules. And of course She can’t just leave her twins alone at night with the nanny.Well, since it’s Sungmin…….!

Sora: “Tomorrow it is right? hmmnn, you know that I don’t usually go out after office hours but then……….okay, What time you gonna pick me up?”

SM: “Around 7 pm, thank you for granting my request Sorayah…I’ll see you tomorrow then, Goodnight and sweet dreams ..hahah!”

Sora:” heheh, okay Goodnight see you tomorrow..”

Sungmin picked up Sora at 7 since the play will start at 9. They had dinner first.

Sora: “My.my, don’t we look extra handsome tonight.” SM was wearing an expensive suit, white dress shirt and a black bow tie.

SM: “You’re not bad yourself, stunning as always.” Sora was wearing a short, black, sleeveless, crinkled chiffon dress with a scooped neckline and an S waistline. She tied her hair in a knot with some tendrills framing her face. Silver high heeled LV shoes accentuated her long legs.

He brought her to a French restaurant known for its perfect ambiance and excellent cuisine. While they were having dinner, Sora informed Sungmin that Leeteuk bring her to his house and ask her about the twins.
SM: “Hyung can really be scary, especially if you crossed him. If not for hae intervening, he would have probably beaten me like a pulp. That’s how angry he was when he found out that I kept your pregnancy a secret. First time I saw him angry like that.Thanks God Hae was with me.” SILENCE……. SM: “What about you, how do you feel about it?”

Sora: “It’s going to be a challenge but I would do anything for my kids. I don’t think Leeteuk will ever forgive me for what I did but I really hope we could stay away from each other so as not to cause any more friction.” SM:” I am here no matter what, you know that right?”

Sora: “I’m sorry, because of me, you got into trouble with your best friend.”

SM: “Don’t apologize. I’m glad that you did, you had no one to turn to at that time. You should know by now that I care about you, a lot.”

Sora: “I care about you too.”

Sungmin: “But not in the way that I would have wanted to. I wanted to be more than just a friend to you.”

Sora: “C’mon. there must be someone more deserving than me; someone who will love you with all her heart. Look what happened to me and your hyung. We were so in love but then, fate broke us apart. That goes to show that we were never meant to be together.”

SM: “I envy hyung for having been loved by you, I wish I was the one who was paired by you in WGM.” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

They were just in time for the opening curtain of “The Phantom of the Opera” . As Sora sat enraptured by the story of the play, she looked back at her relationship with LT. She asked herself, “What went wrong ? where did all that love go?”

When it was time for the intermission, Sora excused herself and goes to the ladies room. Sungmin suggested that they meet at the bar down for some refreshments before the next act. As they stood up to leave, they came face to face with Leeteuk with lady companion who were seated one row behind them. Leeteuk was wearing a black suit similar to Sungmin’s except that he did not wear any bow tie and left the collar of his white dress shirt open. His date looked eye catching in a strapless dress and silver hooped earrings.

SM: “Hyung , this is a surprise.”

LT: “I know. I did not expect to see both of you either.”

Sora and Leeteuk were locked in a staring match. While SM and LT’s date were exchanging pleasantries,Sora averted her eyes from Leeteuk’s stare and turned to Sungmin.”

Sora: ‘See you later.” Turning to Leeteuk and the lady she said, “I’m just going to the ladies room”

LT’s Date: “I’ll go with you.”

On their way to the ladies room, the lady introduced herself,” Hello, I’m Ae young.I’ve heard a lot about you.” Sora:” Oh, really? well, don’t believe everything you heard dear.”

Ae-Young: “What about you being his Girlfriend before, is it true?” Sora: ” You have to ask Leeteuksshi about that, not me….I’m not entitled to answer your question.”
When they rejoined Sungmin and Leeteuk, it was almost time for the show so they went back to their seats. As the lead actor bowed to a standing ovation at the end of the show, Sungmin received a message that he was needed by his mother who was having a mild heart attack.
Sungmin: “Sora, I’m sorry about this. I will send our driver to pick you up, just wait for him alright. Will you be Ok?”

Sora: “Of course, just go your mom needs you.”

Giving Sora a quick hug and a peck on the check, Sungmin rushed out of the theatre.

Leeteuk came to her side and said, “Come with us, I’ll bring you home.”

Sora: “You don’t have to. Sungmin is sending their driver to pick me up.”

Leeteuk: “I’ll send a message to Sungmin that you’re coming with me. Why wait when I can give you a lift?

Ae-young: “Oppa…..”

Sora: “Oh, alright.” Sora cut her out.

Leeteuk brought Ae-Young home first. On the way to her parent’s house, Leeteuk asked Sora about Sungmin.

LT: “Are you and Sungmin lovers?”

Sora: “Leeteuksshi, I don’t think it’s any of your business whether Sungmin and I are lovers.”

LT: “Well, I’ve been thinking now that is the reason why he did not tell me about your pregnancy was because he wanted you by himself.”

Sora: “How could you talk like that about your friend? He has always been a perfect gentleman to me, mind you!”

LT: “Oh sure, that’s why you ran to him instead of informing me, the father of your child, about your pregnancy.”

Sora: “Can we just live Sungmin out of this discussion? If you are looking for someone to blame, blame me ‘coz I was the one who told Sungmin not to tell you.”

LT: “Of course, why not; let’s just leave your lover boy alone.”

Sora: “Leeteuk, I’m sorry if I hurt you without telling you about our kids, but I cannot undo what I’ve done.”

LT: “You have not answered my question. Is he your lover?”

Sora: “No matter what I say to you, you will never believe me anyway so what’s the point? I will not even enthrone your question with an answer.”

When they reached her house Leeteuk got out of the car and opened her door. He took hold of her hands to assist her out of the car, however, the heel of Sora shoes got caught on the strap of the seatbelt so that she almost tripped over had leeteuk not caught her.

Sora trying to steady herself said, “I’m ok now, thanks.” Leeteuk whispered her name, “Sorayah” and then he kissed her slowly, gradually intensifying into a deep,lingeringly, searing kiss. Leeteuk’s fingers parted her lips to receive his kiss. Sora did not move as she allowed Leeteuk to kiss her passionately, breaking down her defenses, her resolve to stay away from him, all the reasons why she should not be involved with him. After the kiss Leeteuk did not let go of her, holding her in a tight embrace, while his hand was gently kneading at her back .Sora jolted back. “No, it can’t be happening again.”  

Leeteuk whispered: “Sora,…. ?” He slowly then let her go, got in his car and drove fast away.

Sora following Leeteuk’s car with her gaze…………………..

this fanfic is written by @jerqu of Teukso Soompi

Chapter 13 & 14 preview

release dates

chap. 13:   15/Oct/2012

chap. 14:   16/Oct/2012 

Teukso fanfic chapter 13 and 14 preview from bbRheya36 on Vimeo.

Attention to all jerqu’s fanfic fans

As agreed with jerqu, we will have the updated chapters available only when she have a draft done for the next chapter so we FD’s wouldn’t need to wait long. But she writes really quick you know! Her brain works as fast as a Ferrari when it comes to visualizing a scene on her story..^ ^ Knowing that, we can’t post one chapter everyday or the story will just end without us realizing it.

Overdose of jerqu’s fanfic could be fatal as evidenced by chapter 12..ROFL.., so we have to have it in moderation. And we don’t want to just spazz on her fanfic on the thread (everyday) or we might get a warning from soompi and jerqu might end up creating her own thread.. Teukso Fanfic Soompi thread..kekeke..

I can’t give a specific day that it would be released, it will depend on when jerqu will have it done.

In addition to that, I’ll provide a preview on the next chapter.

Any objections?hehe.. please free to raise your hands..

playerkbd note: “we are doing this for fun and love doing it, since we don’t have any WGM DC episodes anymore, isn’t it nice to have something to look forward to every week? keeping the Teukso love alive..”

jerqu note: “Please… it would be great if the FD’s who want to post a comment about this FF  better comment here and not in Soompi..Thanks!!!…. Me & @playerkbd will try  our best to make you spazz ’til u get tired……. :) (and playerkbd adds  “and make your cheeks ascend to heaven ’till it hurts…kekeke)

from playerkbd and jerqu: It’s not like we don’t like you spazzing about this ‘coz we really do but we have to be careful of soompi rules and me and jerqu are not really familiar with it.

You can still spazz there but with moderation.



22 responses »

  1. @playerkbd why u posted without u’r MV 😦 , tnx as always…..
    @teukso.is.love Sora & the twins are living alone ,remember Sora have her own pad even when she was still single….

    Tnx for all those who are reading this fanfic..feel free to ask, and bear for all mistakes.remember this is my first time writing^^

    • will do it later..we can’t give all the good stuff in one go right? where’s the fun in that…*evil laugh!!!!..and if I add it with this chap, they might explode!! haha..this chapter alone can make their cheeks ascend to heaven and go crazy…if I add the video, that would be a chaos!!! hahaha.. I just have an evil plan…kekeke…I already have a draft..it only needs editing and uploading!! and since I am at work still, can’t do it…

  2. Short but intense. I got excited like watching a movie. You left me hanging not knowing what they are thinking when they finally kissed. Haha…you are sure a good writer and keep us suspended all the way.

  3. You’re doing great,dear!!! CAn I just add up^^ …Pls. it would be great if the FD’s who want’s to post a comment about this FF better comment here and not in Soompi..Thank’s Me & @playerkbd will try let our best to make you spazz ’til u get tired……. 🙂

  4. Wow!! The preview of Chap 13 & 14 is making my heart beat too fast. Verqu & playerkdb seriously great team work. Thank u both for making FDs so happy =)

    • thanks a lot!! we’re doing it #becauseofteukso and to all FDs who continue to support us with our newfound talents..hehe.. and we’re glad it makes FDs happy.. ^ ^

  5. @playerkbd awesome preview!! i can’t wait for chap13 and 14!!!

    @jerqu.. you are awesome!! keep it up!!

    love you both for creating this much.. atleast we have to experience dimple couple everweek if not everyday…. the least.. happy much!!

    • thanks a lot for appreciating our efforts..we just came up to this idea since we don’t have any DC Saturday anymore, we have this atleast.. Though we all love and anticipate and spazz every news about them, sometimes it gets quiet..

      we’re doing this to atleast fill that void.. and still feel the Teukso Love in our own little way..^ ^

  6. last sentence of the song lyrics… “i guess i wanted u more…”
    really do bring a lot of meaning… good job fellow DC lover.

  7. I read this chapter again. I like the way leeteuk jealous over sungmin..maybe can bring back sungmin character in the next chapter as someone whom is still cared for Sora.. just some random idea.. especially that jisu is back in chap 19.

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