Teukso fanfic chap. 17 “The Commotion” by jerqu


 CHAPTER 17: The Commotion




Waking up, Sora stretched like a contented woman and looking around the bedroom, she noticed that Leeteuk was not around. Glancing at the side, table, she saw the note left for her by LT and on it he wrote, “Mornin’ my baby princess!” She felt the heat on her face when she saw her underwear lying on the side of the bed. After their lovemaking, it become more intense, the feeling of missing each other heightening their passion. Picking up her underwear, she headed for the bathroom and filling the bathtub with hot water and pouring some scented bath oil, she immersed her body in it, resting her head on a bath pillow as she listened to relaxing music from her ipod. Closing her eyes, Sora smiled, her happiness radiating from her face where only a few days ago was full of burden. She could not ask for more; she had only love Leeteuk, the only man in her life as well as having his kids, Vince and Vanessa.


Sora was startled while soaking at the bathtub by the ringing of her phone. Groggily picking it up she answered in a sleepy voice, “Hello.”

 LT: “Hello my sleepyhead baby princess. Did I tire you out? You were sleeping like a baby so I did not wake you up.”

 Sora felt herself blushing when she heard LT’s voice.

 Sora: “Where are you?”

LT: I’m downstairs by the pool. I just finished doing my laps and about to take a shower. I’ll be up soon.Let the twin’s and Kath get ready, I called your Mom & Dad and we’ll meet up with them for breakfast.”

 Sora: “Hmnn, okay…Sounds good to me.It’s my off anyway”

 Sora jumped out the tub to take a shower. She put on a blue silk halter sexy dress with a V neckline, that shows the shape line of her body. LT came in while she was applying baby pink lip gloss. He looked irresistible in a cream polo he left unbuttoned forming a deep V and showing part of his muscular chest and a pair of black jeans pants.

 Hugging her from behind he whispered, “You don’t need to put make-up, you are naturally beautiful.”

 Sora: “I just put on light make-up and lip gloss. See?”

 LT: “Strawberry flavored….why don’t I have a taste.” Tilting her head, he kissed Sora full on the lips, savoring the taste of her as he continued to kiss her slowly and sensually. After he kissed her, LT buried his face in her hair.

 LT: “Sorayah, about last night, I wanted to tell you that…..”

 Sora: “What we had last night were two consenting adults who got carried away and had sex. Don’t worry LT, no strings attached, I wanted it as much as you do. You don’t want to be tied down with me, I don’t want to be tied down by you. As we agreed upon, we go our separate ways after a year.”

LT whirling her around to face him said, “I see. In other words it was just sex for you and nothing else.”

 Sora: “Of course. I am not looking any permanently in our relationship. We agreed that this was just a temporary arrangement so that you can be close to Vince & Vanessa.”

 LT: “So, you were just a willing partner, is that it?”

 Sora: “Compared to the other women you bring to your bed, I hope I did not disappoint you.Did I?”

 LT with a stoic expression on his face remarked, “You are one hell of hot babe, remember? So, why would I be disappointed?” Pulling her towards him, he sneered in her ear, “Let’s do it again sometime.”

 They were interrupted by the phone ringing. LT picked it up; it was Sora’s Father.

 Sora’s Dad: “Where are you, son in-law Teuk. We are already at the hotel lobby, we’re waiting for you.”

 LT: “Mianhe Appa, the kids wake up late but We’re on our way now.”

 Sora: “Why don’t you wait down, while I’ll check if the kids are ready.

 LT: “Fine.”


“Mommy,” Vanessa ran up to her as soon as she entered their room.

Sora hugging and kissing Vanessa asked, “How’s my little princess. Did you miss mummy last night? you were sleeping when I came home. Is Vince ready, Kath? We have to hurry up my parent’s waiting for us.”

 Vanessa: “Uh hmnn.. mum we stay at your room and fall sleep .”

Sora:”Ahumnn,Dad tell me so..Honey go with your dad now, he’s waiting down.”

 Kath: “So, are we going to eat breakfast outside with your parents?”

 Sora: “Yes, Leeteuk reserved already in Lotte Hotel World. I’m sorry    Kath, our situation ..it’s that I…..”

 Kath: “Say no more, I understand and I think you and Leeteuk made the right decision.It’s the best for the kids, hey what’s wrong with your lips?”

 Sora: “Why?”

 Kath approaching at her closely replied, “It looks like its swollen.” Kath suddenly gave a knowing smile, chuckling she added, “That must have been one great night hah!”

 Sora extremely blushing , “Stop it Kath. Nothing happened.”

 KAth: “Hey, my lips are sealed….mmm.”with her fingers zipping her mouth

 “We need to get ready, Leeteuk already waiting for us.Vince hurry up,pls.”


As soon as they came out of the door,Vince saw his father and running to him he called out, “Daddy.” LT lifted Vince in his arms and gave him a kiss.

 Vanessa:”What about me dad.”

 LT put down Vince and lifted Vanessa kissing her on the cheek….

 LT: “Hey,Did you two sleep well?”

 Vince: “Yeah,yeah.. dad.”

 Sora: “Shall we go now?”

 LT: “Yes, They’re waiting for us at the Hotel”

Reaching the hotel they headed to the buffet restaurant, La Seine Lounge the view of the Pacific Ocean from the floor to ceiling glass over-sized windows, spacious rooms offer the comfort of an armchair, and carpeted floors. As per Leeteuk’s instructions, their table was segregated from the other frequently  by planters that were placed around the area to give them privacy.

 Sora’s parents were already there and were poring over the menu when they arrived.

 Sora approached her parents and gave them a hug while Vanessa & Vince went to his grandparent’s to give kiss for respect.

 Sora’s: “Son in-law, Komawoyo. For inviting us having breakfast here.”

 LT: “Eomma, you and appa can come here anytime. Just let me know and I can have a room reserved for you.”

 Sora’s Dad: “Komawoyo Son in-law Teuk.”

 LT:”It’s nothing Appa, really.”

 After breakfast, Vanessa & Vince went for a swim while LT, Sora and Sora’s parents joined them by watching while they were having fun at the kids pool. After they swim they participated in various kids games at the hotel.There were also clowns and magicians to entertain the children. In the afternoon, they went back home except for the parent’s of Sora who stays three days more at the Hotel with LT’s exempt.







One day after they had breakfast at the hotel, LT, Sora and the twins become headline news in the internet, newspapers and TV. There were pictures of Leeteuk carrying Vanessa with Vince and Sora walking beside him. The headline read, “Former SJ Leader, Leeteuk has a twin Love child with former-actress turned successful Career Woman Kang Sora who is in-charge of SM’s post-production for movies & tv series. Footages of LT and Sora included their pictures while they were filming in WGM as virtual husband and wife. To add to the fray, former colleague and friends were interviewed about Leeteuk & Sora. Sora’s office as well Leeteuk’s were busy with telephone calls from viewers and readers as well as media people who wanted to have an exclusive interview. Leeteuk had to hire security people to protect Sora and the twin’s from throngs of reported who invaded the school and Sora’s privacy…..

This fanfic is written by @jerqu of Teukso Soompi

Chapter 18 preview

release date: 02/11/2012

(please let me know if anyone has problem watching the video from vimeo so I can download it on youtube instead)

chap 18 preview from bbRheya36 on Vimeo.

****a little peek at jerqu & playerkbd moment after chapter 18..kkkkkk

jerqu: nYaaaaaaaahhhhh!!! after this my mind is blank for the next chapter……

playerkbd: ommmmmooooo…call an ambulance please..this is an emergency, I just died….

Playerkbd was sent to @malonowa Island ICU for immediate blood transfusion..

Jerqu still recuperating from the shock with her own writing and can’t seem to gather her thoughts for the next chapter…kkkk****


43 responses »

  1. as usual, every chapter gives off different feel.. this chapter…. i don’t know what to say.. it’s simply AWESOME, AMAZING, DAEBAK!! 😀

    Sora-yah, why do you have to say that to Leeteuk? tsk2.. that was a wrong move.. tsk2..

    chapter18, the most anticipated chapter.. *ehem* .. i’ll wait and be patient. i’ll be a good girl..

    preview: amazing, as always.. never failed to disappoint me.. 😀

    @jerqu && @playerkbd , BEST FDs IN THE WORLD! LOVE YOU GUYS! :*

  2. as always, you’re always the first to post a comment!!!

    got the same reaction.. and as @kaiskloset said Sora the Denial Kween..hehe

    love yah girl.. and the PFDs are our best fans ever…kkkk

  3. I can’t play the ff preview.. 😥

    Oooohhh, help!!!! Let me see what’s gonna happen next.. I’m not in my lappy.. My phone doesn’t work well.. :'(((((((

  4. @teuksoislove aren’t U exag. a little bit^^ LOL..U guy’s rock ,I dozed up in the sala last night with my lappie & I have updated C-19 and I’ll try to finished C-20 2day since it’s my off…I’ll be very busy next month , new work, new invironment & I’ll have to settle my new job for a little while…I’ll try to have C-20 have sizzling hot*cough2x scene, to let perjummas happy…hahaahh!
    Evil meeeeeehh!!! :))

    • I think we were all got knackered after all the spazzing on SIA yesterrday.. haha.. I didn’t even wake up at midnight to phone my mom and dad and was so sorry, ^ ^ good thing i’m forgiven now…kekeke

      woah!!!! u’ll be busy girl.. shall I delay the release of Chapter 18 a bit more? (**me with an evil smirk..kkk)

      I have to prolong their wait then for the release of chap. 19 and 20 until u can do chapter 21…

      career first dearie.. ^ ^

    • pretty unni! pretty unni! can i request? hihihi…

      can you add a steamy, hot bath scene? HAHAHA.. XD

      what’s wrong with me??!?!? pervy mind.. tsk2.. got to go to hospital first.. this is not good.. hahaha! :))

      • woaaah!! a steamy bath scene? I like that!!! we’ll ask our FF queen and make a request..hehehe As the President of Perjuhmma club, you make me so proud, keep all those pervy suggestions coming!!!nyahaha.. Oh man!! I think we need to see a specialist..ASAP!!!!

      • hahaha.. I think I’m being a bad unni, influencing you with all these pervy thoughts… bwahaha…I blame @jerqu for this..kkkkkk

  5. nahhh!! release it as U promised don’t worry, remember I have insomnia so I can still update it anytime I want…heheh! my work load will be more but I’m used to it girl^^ Don’t prolong the agony of our beloved Fd’s perjummah…ROFL!!!

    • right oh!!! I am your manager so I have to make sure it doesn’t affect your real life career… hahaha..

      fair enough.. and I don’t think we can survive having all your FDs esp. Perjuhmma FD fans to chase u and stalk u and demand for more chapters..nyhahaha..

      peace PFDs, u know ur Pres love yah!!kkk

  6. Me!!! Deaaaadddd!!!!!

    Oooohhh.. The preview drives me crazy.. So sad i have to wait for 1week.. :'(( and when chapter 18 out, leeteuk is alredy in army.. It hurts.. I want leeteuk having so much more time with his baby princess.. :'((
    Aw, my pervert mind.. Aaarrrhhh.. I need mooooreee.. Kikikikiiii

    • LMAO… :)) watching the preview still gives me nosebleed, you can’t imagine how much blood I already lost in just making it..hehehe

      I know right? at least we have a dose of @jerqu’s ff to keep us happy and feel Teukso love.. ^ ^

  7. nahhh! release it as promised dear^^ I have it all covered with my insomnia and all, it will work just fine.Don’t prolong the agony of waiting for that steaming short but hot *ahemnn lovescene…heeheh!

    • YES BOSS!!!! you’re calling the shots… 🙂

      uh uh.. so chap. 18 is SHORT but HOT… so chap 20 will be a LONG SIZZLING HOT?????hahaha,,, woahh!!! yes please…keke

      all PFDs will be so happy…hahaha

  8. Waaahhh, I thought my comment didn’t pushed through ‘coz my laptop just plug down, can U delete the other one comment pls.*poked @playerkbd 🙂

  9. I read your ff again and again.. It gives me so much drool and nosebleed.. I can’t breath!! CPR please!! Please call my hae!!!!
    Because @jerqu ‘s ff and @playerkbd’s ff scene preview, my mind keep wondering if it’s happen to me and my hae!! #ROFL

    • ROFL… :))
      go visit @malonowa land where you can have Donghae all you want..kekeke… if you want, our Pretty Dictator (PD) malonowa can ask him to be your attending Physician at the ICU too..hahaha..

  10. omo! just read the ff today..
    indeed a commotion!! commotion in my imagination, commotion in my heart.. wah! daebak!

    i wonder what would happen if media really spread it out.. i hope i get to read some news too saying “Kang Sora and Lee Teuk was already engaged even b4 LT leaves for army” -dated aug2014..

    what you think?

    as always, clap.clap.clap! more..more..more..

    hugs guys,, thank you for creating such ART!

  11. Hi, it;s 2.45 am here…. sleeping earlier so i can wake up earlier and Finally i can watch the preview…

    in this chapter media already knew.. hmmm… sora so selfish here.. why she say a word like that to him? and this chapter is short one, want to longer story …
    after watching preview, indeed curios with the next chap… kekeke… OMO… can’t imagine…. kekeke preview make me nosebleed…
    “love part when PJS parent told him to married her”…

    • Sorry for the late reply, I was in Teuksodreamland when u sent me the message.. u not knowing the password mean you’re not a soompier right?? send me back a reply then I’ll give u the password and delete it afterwards once u opened it.. 😉

      • thanks dear…i got the password by myself on sompie.:p
        I’m passive sompie reader dear,always curious about what happens with them and following the conversation.
        By the way,i fall too deep at the story line,now suffering delution,got a lot of pleasure..hahaha..

      • that’s good.. ^_^ glad we keep everyone entertained..enjoy the rest of the chapters..

        btw,don’t worry, you are not alone on your delusions..:D

    • Coz it’s password protect due to mature content..LOL..

      Password: ***********

      Once u finish reading,can u tell me so I can delete the password here..there are more chapters that are password protected. If u have twitter, just poke or mention me @playerkbd but if u don’t have any, just ask on any comment section of FF chapters and I’ll give it to u..^^

      Thanks for reading and I’ll let @jerqu knows that u love her FF.. 😉

  12. wohoo hello there can i get the password for chapter 16, 20 and 21 i just found out about this lovely dimple couple fanfic hehehe btw i am new reader here i wanna see ur hard work about this fanfic thankyouuuu

    • Hi there..sorry I’m at work. Please check When Love and Hate Collide chapter 6 or 7 COMMENTs section, someone asked and I didn’t delete the passwords yet.. Thanks for reading..

      • thank you anyway!~~ and how can i get the password for the next chapters? (just in case!) *.*
        + i really enjoy this fanfic, and made and account just for it. hope it won’t ever end. *-*

      • I think I didn’t delete it yet on d comment section of When Love and Hate Collide Chapter 6 or 7..I posted all password in Teukso Soompi when we were posting this fanfic. If u have twitter acct, follow me @playerkbd and mention me if u want any password..

      • Aigoo.. Then i need to tell you that it has been deleted and you need to bear with me for a while because i need TeukSo. ~~bianadayo. ;(

      • has it?? Sorry about that..I think for the next chapter with password, it going to be: proud2beperjuhmma and for the uncut chapter: perjuhmma4ever

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